天下無友 發表於 5-7-2008 22:11:18

It is my the life case (english is very difference)

yesterday,my go to a school,but it not my school.
In school have some student ,they all is age at my big yet study the time long
but my with as they learn (is am are /do does /have has)
I feel very.....


if have grammar correct,(I not care )

help my correct
thenk your

[ 本帖最後由 天下無友 於 5-7-2008 22:36 編輯 ]

天下無友 發表於 5-7-2008 22:33:15

today,my with friend go to the Kowloon Tony of cathedra of from 5 way,
but us in MTR nearby find time more,join the time fast
us try asking lady what this a way go to
today feel is very unlucky day


if have grammar correct,(I not care )
help my correct
thenk your

[ 本帖最後由 天下無友 於 5-7-2008 22:35 編輯 ]

戀花-魚子`*] 發表於 6-7-2008 17:28:25

solo:) 發表於 6-7-2008 17:37:36

原帖由 天下無友 於 5-7-2008 22:33 發表 http://nakuz.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif
today,my with friend go to the Kowloon Tony of cathedra of from 5 way,
but us in MTR nearby find time more,join the time fast
us try asking lady what this a way go to
today feel is very unlucky d ...
Today,I went to the cathedrae of from 5 way in Kowloon Ton with my friends,
(unknown)
we tried to ask the lady that what the direction we were staying.
I feel we were very unlucky today.

If I have any mistakes,please remind me.

[[[[[yesterday,my go to a school,but it not my school.
In school have some student ,they all is age at my big yet study the time long
but my with as they learn (is am are /do does /have has)
I feel very.....]]]]]

Yesterday,I went to the school,but it is not my school.
There were some students in the school,all of them are bigger than me and they have stuied for a long time(unknown)

[ 本帖最後由 solo:) 於 6-7-2008 17:41 編輯 ]

天下無友 發表於 6-7-2008 18:54:08

today,Now have more time in the home ,but not want to learn some english,
I want use well some english of tell can with foreigner.
I want study english every have some case tempt me




if have grammar correct,(I not care )

help my correct
thenk your

[ 本帖最後由 天下無友 於 6-7-2008 18:57 編輯 ]

Bhavacakka 發表於 6-7-2008 23:12:50

天下無友 發表於 7-7-2008 10:23:54

原帖由 Bhavacakka 於 6-7-2008 23:12 發表 http://www1.nakuz.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif
i don't understand chinglish :lol

what have you don't understand
you can tell ,I can hear ,
have are you write grammar has correct,
I knowl use the english have correct

[ 本帖最後由 天下無友 於 7-7-2008 10:27 編輯 ]

Bhavacakka 發表於 7-7-2008 13:35:58

發表於 10-7-2008 19:29:45

i don't understand wt u mean...= =

akirafreedom 發表於 24-7-2008 20:41:52

it's really hard to understand what you mean.....@@
try not to translate english from chinese

"thenk you" should be thank you
and the red words should be
I will be glad if anyone could help me to correct the mistakes

my english is also awlful, sorry if I have made any mistakes
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